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angel inmy cupboard

It was a bright suny day, woody the woodpecker woke up Badger  its angel day.
you mean egg day I beter get going . where did I put those Eggs? oh yeah I put them in the cupboard there they are. what was that ? the Eggs moved hey whose thier come out oh well . what was  going on. lets set a trap he found a Basket ,a net and a peice of rope!
he made a trap he put some Eggs in the trap. The first time it was Bug Bob !the second time it was pinata pole !the third  time it was the angel. what a tiny angel my name is angelus .Badger its angel day no its Egg day no angel day  its when every angel hides like that one.

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    nice write little bud *clappys*


  • spirit rising
    December 17, 2008

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    wow what a cute little story, i love the names of all the charactors too, you used great detail too so as i read i could form a picture in my head especially all the bits needed for the trap! well done mew, i hope you write another story, x


  • Hikari Lady
    December 17, 2008

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    This was cute!! So very cute and I liked the idea behind it. Got to tell it to my nephews, they'll like it.
    Thanks for sharing, keep writing.

    Love&peace
    ~Noor

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Nice one mew. Your poems seem to get better each time I read them. Have a great holiday season. Brian