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Dreamy Skies





Picture perfect clear blue sky
enthralls me in dreamy delight
sending me reeling with soft sigh
glimmer of sun shines so bright
renders me breathless and high
soft dreamy skies adorn my sight













































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Harrisham Rhyme

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 27, 2008

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    This is a nicely-crafted poem, in which you express the feelings of serenity, which the nature is providing you with.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • word20dragon
    December 17, 2008

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    Great Write

    This is a nice short poem and it discribes a bright sunny day so well I like poem that have to do with nature there are so many hidden secrets and meanings in nature.


    • Topaze
      December 17, 2008
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      Thank you very much, my best wishes.