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Can I Kill?

Seeing red again
It's in my head again
It's all around me now
I can't escape

So tell me

Can I kill?
Just a few
Just a little
Maybe a little too much

So tell me, are we having fun yet?

Every day
It's all the same
It's all a game
It's driving me insane

So tell me

Can I kill?
Just a few
Just a little
Maybe a little too much

Are we having fun yet?
Tell me
Are we
Are we having fun yet

You say that I can't
You tell me I should
But I can't decide who gets it

You say that it's wrong
You tell me it's right
But it's not up to me to decide

You tell me you want me
To do it for you
But never to do it
Can't do it just for me

So tell me

Can I kill?
Just a few
Just a little
Maybe a little too much

The TV says that it's ok if
The MORAL say
If they deserve it

So can I kill?
Just a few
Just a little
A little is never enough

So tell me
Are we having fun yet?

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  • iamlost gold member
    January 15

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    Hoodwink!

    "You say that it's wrong
    You tell me it's right
    But it's not up to me to decide"

    I love it, this sounds like a song, and one I'd turn up the volume for if I heard it on the radio. I really love the refrain, especially the part that goes "Just a little/Maybe a little too much". I also love the repetition of "are we having fun yet?", it really helps set the kind of insane but completely rational (if that makes any sense) tone of the poem. This is great, I really enjoyed reading this.

    ~lost