i asked you once to tell me
it was important to me then
how do i distinguish from the truth
all the lies and the deception
i wanted fairy tales
and happy ending to come true
waiting for a princes charming
on his mystical white stallion
i wore rose coloure glass
and for a while i lived that dream
then i opened up my eyes
and let the real world in
A contest entry
- Lie To Me by vampedvixen.
550 points, ended January 14, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think we all have dreams that we long for to come true.
Sometimes they do come true and other times not, but we have to hold on to them for they are what keeps us alive.
Great job with this.
Soulful Woman
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once again
thank you.......i'm not that great when it comes to checking and rechecking......i count on my friends to pick up what i miss......and you's always come to my rescue each time.......huggggs to you and love always
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It would be a poorer world if we did not dream, even though the dream does not come true. I like your poem as it speaks of reality and is well constructed. Good luck.
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This seems like a fantasy. Something we all dream for. Great write keep them coming. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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thank you
each time i come on i always hope to bumb into my sister.....but fate isnt on my side right now.......your talent is amazing and your kindness something beyond words......thank you sis......for just being you
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This seems like a fantasy. Something we all dream for. Great write keep them coming. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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