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Following you.

I'm in the sky,
watching over you,
following your footsteps,
following you.

Watching you in the cornfied,
helping you too,
following your footsteps,
following you.

Doing well in school,
guiding you through,
following your footsteps,
following you.

My sweet dear brother,
please look behind you,
following your footsteps,
following you.

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  • serenity silvermoon
    October 23

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    aww.. how cute i bet your brother is looking down from heaven above reading this poem and watching you and now he is following your footsteps thank you for sharing keep up the great work


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 25

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    awwwwwwwww


    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    December 18, 2008
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  • She burns
    December 17, 2008

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    So sweet and touching, a very loving write from the heart, following your brother's footsteps and hoping one day that you'll be like him...