Love is patient love is kind,
It does not easily anger but sometimes it’s blind
It is not rude, and keeps record of no mistake
It just keeps filling you up and replaces all life’s hate
Love is inside but outside too
And doesn’t depend on another’s view
Love is something that is with you at all times
It’s in your heart and it can fill your mind
Love grows the more you give it away
So you have all the more to share another day
So give it freely don’t hold back
Look inside and find its endless stack
It can radiate from you if you make it who you are
You can make yourself shine bright as a star
You can light the world with the love you give away
So make sure everything about you is love this very day
A contest entry
- Anniversary of My Birth as an AP Poet =] by Memoirs of a Girl.
700 points, ended January 18, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very touching love poem. This reminds me of the bible verse from "A Walk to Remember". The emotion is very strong, and sweet.
The only problem that I had with it is the rhyme. It seems very forced. I don't agree with rhyming poems, because I feel like it limits the author's creativity, and that is clearly the case here.
Thanks for entering!
~Memoirs
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