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Haunting Blue Eyes

A girl with haunting blue eyes walks in a castle,
the years of past tenents walk along side from another life.

No one sees this rare beauity only during the night she appears,
in a graveyard that is has been long forgotten by most.

Those who do see her she is a sight to behold,
only an immortal could have her beauty.

This rare gem in a cavern that is littered with dead rocks,
only a few have yet to find but still leave her behind.

Some say she is forever cursed to live alone.
Some say she is merely but a ghosts from a long forgotten past.

Whatever the case may be,
people still come to watch and peer from behind the gate.

Just in cast they might see a girl walking alone,
in a huge castle with haunting blew eyes
walking with others from another life.

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just something i wrote a bit ago

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