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Solitary

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Deep in the midst


Of a solitary heart
Embers fire she sparks


Dancing in flame
Raised high her athame


Tis your name she calls
In her dance to the All


Tis the wind she's clinched tight
As she soars through the night


Gazing in to her flame
Once again calls your name


Wings brushed in moonlight
She sings out her rite

So Mote it be
He must come to me


As my flames grow higher
Fill him my desire


I soar through this night
Bid him to join my flight

There he appears
To the fire falls her tears


Wrapped now in his love
So below as above


For eternity
Blessed Be

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  • Voodoo Eyes
    June 21

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    Splendid!

    This is to beautiful. I love the imagery and I love your background. Wonderful job. Thank you for entering!


  • Myjoy gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Ha ha it's funny you enter this one for it is the very first I ever read of yours. Thank you for sharing and good luck.


  • Mizzundaztood gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    This is exactly the type of feed back i was looking for, I appreciate your entry. Great job, and thank you.


  • shanda
    December 18, 2008

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    I like this poem. It rhymed pretty well, too, except for one part, but maybe you pronounce athame different that I do. But it's still a pretty poem. Don't be mad, please.

  • Eric Hanyon
    December 18, 2008
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    forgot to applaud you are amazing with your words

  • Eric Hanyon
    December 18, 2008

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    This shows such beauty. Your word memorize me. I see how you have fallen in love with the wiccan religion. Good luck in the contest. But I do not think you need it!


  • PerpetualNight
    December 17, 2008

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    This is simply beautiful. You have such a lovely writing style. Amazing. Simply amazing.

    -Perpetual Night


  • Lady Australis silver member
    December 17, 2008
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    this is a beautiful poem mothr
    i love you

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