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scraps from my coilback

As I bow before You again I bring my troubles,
this want,
this need,
this hunger for all things not right.



At last a glimpse of true love!
Only to be coupled with a crushing blow of jealousy.
Why does this tear me apart?
I love her.
Simple.

So I thought.



A day,
a night,
a week,
a month.
I gaze into her eyes,
she into mine.



Pure beauty.
A gift from God.
Dreams of running,
hand in hand,
through wide open fields.
No cares.
No worries.
No mistaken intentions.
No feelings tread upon by words.

Author notes

These aren't the greatest but they have all been in my notebook for a while. like i said in the title... just scraps

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  • pandora ink
    December 25, 2008
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    Impressive scraps, though.

    • Thank you muchly dear Foog.... so you have to be here withing the next month yes? If not you are a booger and not my friend for like 30 seconds... this will be hard on the both of us so lets just be friends k?