Memories tucked away inside
dirty nail beds and upon unclean lips.
[No means no]
It was a day
I'll never forget.
A contest entry
- DIRTY [P.r.e.t.t.y] WHORE by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 6, 34 entries
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Brilliant
So few words with such deep meaning in which the reader can take their imagination and run with it with your excellently penned poem. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest.
Happy Holidays,
Kelle Marie
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This is heartbreaking.
I know this feeling.
Amazing write.
♣ Tegan
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wow. i don't even know what to say. although i really do like these types of poems. you are really good at these. this one is amazing. great job! keep up the good work.
BV
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-feels stomach, and feels babies kick-
yeah.....i know how that does.
xxoo
gypsy -
wow you realy have a way to say everything without realy sayign much! your awsome great job!
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thank you
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