Zeus,
Shaping the weather
According to his temper.
Remember to keep him pleased.
Athena,
Teaching mankind war
What happended to the peace I saw before?
All that's left is gore, gore, gore.
Poseidon,
God of the sea
the future he cannot foresee,
But storms he can guarantee.
Demeter,
When winter is born
Be sure you have some coats that aren't outworn
Becuase all she'll do is mourn, mourn, mourn.
All those gods
Are only frauds.
Author notes
my first poem with a lot of rhyme and this much repitition
english: gods
original word: qeovß
transliterated word: theos
the title is gods in ancient greek
greek gods are fake,
but theyre funny.
i like them.
to write this poem
i did a lot of research
thats why it took so long
but im pleased with my result
one of my few poems that rhyme
A contest entry
- Religion by Mizzundaztood.
700 points, ended December 20, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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i love zeus
interesting poem; mythology amazes me, and parts interest me - i liked the rhymes here, and how you introduced us to each character.
thanks for entering
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Interesting rythming, A unquie twist, which gave delight and dwell. The use of greek gods, and new age glow. Spinned nicely, Great write.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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I like this. I especially liked your rhyming techniques, great job, I'm putting you with my finalists.
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