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share your beauty

Your beauty shines,
Like rain drops on rose petals,
A beauty so unforgetable,
A beauty so desirable,
Its your beauty I long for.

Your beauty shines,
Like the sea under clear blue skies,
A beauty so breathtaking,
A beauty so serene,
Its your beauty I yearn.

Your beauty shines,
Like a lit fire place in winter,
A beauty so comforting,,
A beauty so divine,
Its your beauty I crave.

Will you share your beauty with me?
Its the most amazing thing I've ever known...

wat do u think? I haven't written anything in years so I hope its ok lol, and thanks for reading :)

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Your visuals, and portrayals of love are clearly seen as very beautiful. All favorite spots to me as I read....Very creative write!

  • mcfreeman
    December 17, 2008
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    This thought seems almost there

    ...but still un-completed


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 16, 2008

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    This is very beautiful and a lovely write
    for someone that you love. You did a wonderful job putting this together. Thanks a lot for sharing it here and keep it up! I look forward to reading more from you. Take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    This is wonderful and I enjoyed the read hon! Great job and keep penning