remember
Ra
pressed against
dwarf fingers
when He looked
into our eyes
you couldn’t save
mine
from thawing
someboys.
somegods.
Author notes
what? i never cheat!
In a list
A contest entry
- 20 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended December 19, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i distort facts at times. fact-of-my-life is sigularly a pain in the butt. so sometimes it's completely not fiction. don't waste your points on me please.
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i love the idea and sound i create within my mind
when i think of you
saying
"someboys.
somegods."
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btw i hate that you used ra
fuck him. -
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fuck you.
ra be my homie. -
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you would be safer with paddington bear
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uh huh listen to the girl... go smooth
*munches on popcorn*
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watch it or i might just axe handle you.
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i will astro project and round house kick your face down the stairs.
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i ran out of wrestling moves.
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*sits with popcorn and coke* yeah i am ready you people can start hahhahahah
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LOL, i, of course, will win.
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eeeeeeeeeee you must! go show him what you got, tiger!
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oh God... someone's jealous... i didn't love him too much here, did i?
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he's HOT?
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i love that you used ra.
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why? what's so good about ra?
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i've had an old infatuation with egyptian mythology.
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i nearly pissed myself.
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lol!!
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psh. you just ruined my image of ra.
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Ra?
is that the sun?
a puppy?
hey don't laugh... just trying to figure this out
compound words by you = awesome (:
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