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The Start Of Something Bigger


Approaching the end of school feels like the start of something bigger;
Bigger than the grass-coated fields in the school’s backyard
And the sounds of triumph as you reach the end, louder than the trigger
Of the starting gun as you dive right in, trying to win so hard

It’s impossible to believe that the last swimming carnival was your last
And that you may never walk these corridors or stairways again
Well, you know it’s a cliché, but those six years went so fast
It’s funny to think: in such a short time, you made so many friends

But now the time has come at last, for you all to go your separate ways
And you make fleeting promises with all of them that you’ll always stay in touch
Yet, you still feel like you’re walking into a new classroom far away
Where no old mates can follow and you don’t know anything much

You take a deep breath and search for your pre-assigned place
In this huge, new world outside the school’s building, beyond that gate
And you try your best to fit in and keep up with the pace
While reminiscing on old school photographs, starting to accept fate

Remembering the graduation day, waving goodbye in the afternoon
Knowing that there would be no return, the path was sealing as you were walking
Funny how you can barely remember the bad times or the days that could not end too soon;
The clearest memories are the smiles from the days when your friends got busted for talking

 

Author notes

Sorry if this isn't quite what you were looking for... but I saw your contest and it inspired me "Goodbye class of 09"

I should probably say that 2 songs inspired some lines in this...
-- "The End Of School" and "Thanks For Today" [ both by Kate Miller-Heidke ] --

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  • Sunkissed xo
    December 21, 2008

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    A lovely, heart-felt write here. Your perfectly capture the scene of farewell and the emotion that goes with it in your beautiful words. I wonder if I'll feel this way when I leave school. Hmm. Anyway, congratulations on graduating and best of luck in your future career! Oh yes and well done on a great write.


    • KyleBerg gold member
      December 21, 2008

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      haha, you're not the only one wondering if you'll feel that way... I am too! I still have 2 years of school left... I was writing this from the perspective of someone who just left school, but it definately ins't about me (sorry for misleading you!)

      But anyhow, thank for the lovely comment, much appreciated


  • writingismycure
    December 20, 2008
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    Brilliant

    I love this! It is true beyond words. Goodluck in my contest thanks for your entry!


    • KyleBerg gold member
      December 20, 2008
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      I'm so glad you liked it!
      Thanks for the wonderful comment

  • panic-tiger-is-here
    December 19, 2008

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    I love it. Its a brilliant peice of work Well done


  • redhanded
    December 17, 2008

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    such a great and inspiration write. very well pen'd.
    best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 17, 2008

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    I almost regret dropping out of school after reading this ~

    I feel deprieved I don't the feeling of something bigger on the horizon as I finish my days at school - This is great hun Always a good thing when you can make me feel


    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda

    • KyleBerg gold member
      December 17, 2008
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      I'm sorry to hear you missed out.

      But in all honesty, it seems so far away to me that I wouldn't be devastated if I had to give up school

      Thanks for the kind words, as always

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