We will be famous
just wait and you’ll see-
the lore of our love
eclipsing History.
This love it is epic
written before in the stars,
the millions and billions
strive for love such as ours.
With that fame comes fortune
we will want for naught,
in our hearts the riches
o’er which wars are fought.
Our fortune grows daily
gaining interest each breath,
renown spreads so wide
the tale won’t end in death.
We’ll live on forever
in hearts and in minds,
as history echoes
'Ne’er was a love like this kind.'
Author notes
Amy Tan:
I am like a falling star who has finally found her place next to another in a lovely constellation, where we will sparkle in the heavens forever
A contest entry
- Love. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended January 2, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Looking forward to your thoughts
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This was really lovely.. The imagery and emotion really spoke to the reader. and the rhyme was wonderful as well! thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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The flow and rhyme was almost flawless, the imagery was heartwarming and the emotions here was beautiful.. an all around wonderful write! Thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest.
Kat -
With that fame comes fortune
we will want for naught,
in our hearts the riches
o’er which wars are fought
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You went a different way with this, I saw it as one prompt of death and eternity and you saw it as a forever. Nice job and soft rhyme here, good luck
~Luce
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Rhyme very well done here, good luck in Jet's contest C
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