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Class of 2009

As I walk down the aisle
in sync to  the traditional tune,
I see my lifetime friends,
and know our lives will be separate soon.

I see hopeful faces,
eager and frightened, too.
But now it's our time
to get out and try something new.

Standing in front of you tonight,
I'm so proud we didn't quit.
No matter how many times we groaned,
Here we all are, we made it.

So look around at each other,
remember the years we spent
trying to get to this day,
now knowing what it meant.

Dare to gaze into the future,
map your life's design-
And know it all started with
the class of 2009.

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Goodbye class of 09.

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  • Haygood gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    The future is your...

    what you do with it is up to you. I just know you will do well, Simone. Great poem.


  • writingismycure
    December 20, 2008

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    This reminds me something of my poem I wrote. Really pretty. I like this a lot. Thanks for your entry and goodluck in my contest!

  • dillpickle62
    December 17, 2008

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    '09

    "I don't know what lays beyond the mountains of my back yard" You've reminded me of a line from my own graduation poem. Jeez... been along time. Nice one kiddo. Your poetic talent beams.


  • broken-colours
    December 16, 2008

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    Aww.. I'm in the class of 09... I don't know if I want to stay or go yet... but I guess I have to figure out soon.

    Anyway, this was very well-written. Great job! good luck in the contest you entered