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Christmas in Tennessee

Unlike the Christmasses of my childhood in Ohio,
when I could go outside and play in the snow.
Building a lop-sided snowman or playing with my sled.
I I even remember my jacket. .
it was red.
Winters in Tennessee are different;
the streets are bare.
the warm weather, won't let snow stay.
No snowy fun can people share.
No sledding, or snowmen.
It just isn't right.
Why I can't have winter memories in Tennessee,
that I can hold as tight.

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  • abu nuwas
    June 7, 2009

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    Well...

    It is a touching picture, even if it contradicts the weather-charts we see for N America. I thought the rhyming a bit forced, especially 'share', but liked the last two lines.


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    February 19, 2009
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    I know exactly what you mean! I grew up in Toledo, and I am now in Tennessee.
    Great write Peggi!


  • islekine
    December 23, 2008
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    Thanks for sharing!

    Best wishes in the contest and always!


  • ea silver member
    December 17, 2008

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    This is sort of sad, the displaced northerner. Doesn't Tennessee offer its own flavor of Christmas? Merry Christmas, Tennessee


  • toomysterious
    December 16, 2008

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    Perhaps this year you will have snow, I hear it is pretty cold there now. Nice little Christmas lament for the cold and snow.

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