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Love Remembers

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Showers softly dancing droplets upon the face,

sunrises pouring tangerine honey over a day,

skies stroking cerulean serenity in stunning grace,

streams singing gurgling rhapsody of soothing sway,

shorelines strolled as tides wash with peace’s embrace,

slopes climbed holding hands, flowering in passion’s array.

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 27, 2008

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    This is a delightful poem, expressed with beautiful and placid imagery.
    The way you included alliteration and started every line with the letter "s" is interesting.
    An enjoyable poem.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas

  • chiefmac
    December 18, 2008
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    The picture offer tranquality to accept solice with the wind. The poem takes the reader through a serene day with the sun sheding light and warmth over the land. Shoreline and hills climbed and strolled down holding hands. The smooth rhythm and rhyme lull the reader into peaceful bliss


  • Desire gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Oh My~

    You did form
    -throws streams and confetti-
    this is a rare event my Friend~
    We are in the same contest too
    This will be my first time trying ~
    I walked into a wall just thinking about it
    Wonderful weaving of words~
    Woot!
    Love it!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Blessings to You & Yours Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Wonderfully penned dear bro and you surely packed some amazing imagery in this.
    A lovely Harrisham Rhyme., Clever how tyou managed to get every line starting with the same letter too!
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • Denerica
    December 16, 2008
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    The colors and where I am at just come out, nice flow as always. Blessings


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    lovley

    you never disappoint


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    Wonderful here I loved your descriptions! I enjoyed this from you and good luck in the contest hon


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    Wonderful imagery
    Your word usage is magnificent
    and such a beautiful picture as well

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