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Leaking

  I thought I was strong
            I thought I could endure

And yet here I am leaking
                    I think you call these tears
Who would of thought

              so much pain would follow such little words

I took the chance
    I gave my heart away
      And you broke it
                      and threw it away

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Options 2:Word prompt- tear(s)

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  • you have 4 poems in the contest so your points will be divided. this poem was good you've got an 18 for this poem. thanks for entering and best of luck to you .kahy


  • Meroza
    December 20, 2008

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    A very original point of view and expirience, it is a part of growing up and a part of life to live and learn.
    Well written

    Best of luck


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    December 18, 2008
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    Great write, i loved reading it, thanks for sharing