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Turning Your Heaven To Hell

You tried to turn my life into Heaven.
While I tried to turn it into Hell.
You gave me flowers and dresses with laces and frills.
While I dressed in red and black and went bar hopping.
You tried to make me a good girl,
When I clearly wanted to be bad.
You tried to get me baptised,
When I wanted to play with the devil.
You gave up on me and then you went away.
Now I'm the bad girl I've always wanted to be,
But it's not as fun without you.
So I guess I'll be good so I can be with you.

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  • CharleeBoy
    December 16, 2008

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    very good addition to the poem :]]
    you followed the rules very well and got a lot out of this contest, good luck!