There is nothing in this world as beautiful as you my love.
As beautiful as the heavens above.
You make me the happiest of all.
There is no other like you for you are an angel.
As beautiful as a warm beach sunset.
You caress my heart with the greatest of ease.
I was drawn by you'r beauty.
Only to find the true love within.
Diamonds cannot yet match your beauty.
As can no other precious stone on this earth.
You are the greatest gem of all.
You shine as bright as the suns rays upon my skin.
No one human can stare into your eyes without pure admiration.
They are as if made by god himself.
So beautiful yet so seductive.
Pulling you in against all will.
You'r body as beautiful as a goddess.
If not a mirror reflection of Venus.
No one can match your beauty.
For you are my angel.
Author notes
i like it i took alot of time on this one
A contest entry
- you are... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 24, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
im not to great but what do u think?
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this is the best one i've read of yours... so far.... i love the way you wrote it, how every detail is perfect and everything. i love the whole thing. very good write.
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fantastic write
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Ah..what an imaginative work you have crafted very soothing and loving as well..well done...thanks for the entry..
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This is beautiful love,
I really really like this,"I was drawn to your beauty,
only to find true love within"
know what?
I can honestly tell you,
this is my favorite one of all.
Great job :]
i love you.
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I really like this. I love the comparisons in your poem
Diamonds cannot yet match your beauty
&
You'r body as beautiful as a goddess
Beautiful imagery and it flows real good too.
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