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A Sink Full Of Dishes.

Stagnant water stills,
Lulling under me
Begging my sweet silent kisses
To steal away a sigh.
Through the looking glass
Awaits a selfish escape.
In the shallow waters I lay my head,
Gentle warm waves,
Sing me to sleep.

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  • invisible2u
    January 31

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    thanks for entering my contest, i really enjoyed your poem i have a lot of poems to read before deciding...

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    A nice piece, but I will be honest when reading shorter pieces I expect this amazing wow factor and I didn't find that here.

  • carole21
    December 17, 2008
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    shocking but well done . . congrats on the HM . .


  • KayJay
    December 16, 2008
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    Beautifully done... cliche or not, this is lovely...
    Ken


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    This is a lovely write, bordering on cliche, but not quite there yet... I love your title! Well done, and good luck!

    Laura

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