As we swam in the oceans bluest waters
I felt his hands gently on my back
I turned to face this lover
His encouraging embrace didn't lack
I moved closer to him slowly
trembling in his warm embrace
cold water splashed around us
As he entered with experienced grace
The tickle of the cold blue sea
only added ecstasy to his touch
as I felt him deep inside me
his warmth engulfed me so very much
I never really new what was love
till he ravished me that day
We sank beneath the oceans tide
enticing amorous tides at bay
I could hardly breath as he thrust further more
hands groping, I'm in love
forgetting myself I fully came there for him
he released inside me again once more
As we surfaced I began to see fully
this beautiful being swimming with me
Like delicate gentle fins
his love for me always wins.
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I'm glad you did!
Risk taking is what it is all about! Write and grow and try different things. You will never regret making the effort. Thank you for your 'sensual' write.
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Not the type of thing I normally like at all, but you made it very sweet and pretty : )
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