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Here

Here I sit
Heart in hands.
Watching them all
Interrogate each other.
Asking for love
Reciving heart break.
Here we smile
To the fake day.
Yet here we cry
Hand in hand.
Asking a simple question
Will you Be mine?

Author notes

Kind of a though I got when my bf asked me if he could keep me forever and always.

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  • serenity silvermoon
    December 19, 2008

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    nice poem it was a very lovely read you did a very great job hear you really have great talent keep that pen flowing and you will go far thanks for sharing god bless you forever and always
    serenity


  • atomicmagoo
    December 19, 2008
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    Mmmm.... Like it!


  • hks
    December 18, 2008
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    interrogate each other"