In the brotherhood of blood
love is no excuse,
I shouldn't have fallen for you,
I knew that I would lose,
just put a bullet in my brain,
and paint the walls with the splatter,
loving you drives me insane,
yet you're the only thing that matters.
Shut up and bleed,
lie to me no more,
you have nothing that I need,
leave me here on the floor,
leave me alone,
please just go away,
you already burned down my home,
There's nothing left to say,
leave me as a memory,
and take all thats mine,
your bound by lies,
and I can see,
right past your disguise.
Run little baby,
and never look back,
i'll flee from the pain,
and all the love you lack,
i'll keep running, until my veins pump battery acid,
and I crumble to the floor,
and when I think i've gone too far,
i'll get up and run some more.
Author notes
"that's what you get when you let your heart win"
A contest entry
- Promised Forever by Megan Awesome.
750 points, ended January 18, 2009, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DIRTY [P.r.e.t.t.y] WHORE by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 6, 2009, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i know you didnt use that prompt for this contest; but it fits greatly. the last paragraph sung to me a chorus of paramore.
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I live the rhyme in this! It flows so well! I really love how much emotion is in this, even though it makes me sad. I wouldn't change anything about it. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
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Love it. Everything seemed to flow together great, only in a couple spots it didn't make sense. And I love the anger and the spite behind it. Good job
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Thankies, I know. I reread it and I was like wtf???
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wow sav sav i like it....
and i miss you lots luv you
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you are great and the way i think you always have to let your heart win other wise there will be no real point in living no point in anything the bast thing is love and the most inportant is heartbreak it makes you stronger and lets you knwo yoru inportant adn you can do this without that person i loved your poem adn i hope you keep up the good work
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amazing
lve it
savi u amaze me constantly baby -
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Thanks babe. Glad you enjoyed it.
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oh my fucking god I love this poem, almost as much as I love you
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Thankies Darlin. I love you too
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{Finishes the song}
"WHOA OH OH OH OOOOOHHHH!!!!!!!"
...Sorry. I had to do it.
Anyway.
I liked the poem, alot. I could visulalize it in my head.
Rhyming was good and such also.
I liked it very much so.
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Thanks Brosia. Glad you liked it!
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