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As one.

Hatred and love,
my best friend, my worst enemy.
Controlled with adrenaline,
deceived with disdain,
blinded by lust,
pathetically human, alone.

Perfection? Together we achieve it.
Immortality? Together we live it.
Together we will be worshipped.

They'll fall for me too easily,
bow to you too quickly.
Our breath will make them crumble.

We are one in the same,
old pal, forgotten friend, sworn enemy.
I'll always keep you close,
close enough to touch, to caress, to kill.

This promised alligence is godly,
this partnership, morbid.
The pain we inflict will last eons,
the scars we leave behind will never be forgotten.
For an eternity we shall be feared, respected:
in this we exist as a deadly duo, unmatched, unsurpassed.

Forever friends, eternally enemies.
Soulfully the same.

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  • zombietom
    December 16, 2008

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    i like the description of humanity in the first stanza.

    I think the second and third stanzas are excellent!

    Great write all the way through