You have such a funny personality
But at home, its a bad reality
To see what she does to you everyday
Fills me with total dismay
The yelling and the screaming
And her evil eyes gleaming
Why do you take the abuse
Her past is no excuse!!
Its not just emotional pain she inflicts
And you never start these conflicts
But day after day is another bump or bruise
Leave before they become permanent tattoos!
She keeps you from having any friends
And still you try to make amends
You have such a big heart
And all she does is tear you apart!
She is slowly digging a grave for you
Because she has the other guy to pursue
She has brought you down to the extreme
But I know you still have some self esteem
Pick your head up, smile, and walk away
And I'll hold your hand the whole way
Let show the world how strong you are
And soon we'll have that victory cigar!
Suggestions are welcome!
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This is very good Mindie. Its weird how love can make you stay in an abisive relationship. Cause you think you will not find anyone else. You get that feeling that you are stuck. But really your self-esteem has been shot so low.
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Love the inspiration and encouragement conveyed. And good use of rhyme again. Thank you for sharing.
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you are the best friend a person can have...i truly am going to do what you have suggested and thanks to you i can beilve in myself again...i am so happy i just happen to be listening one day in robs room ...Thank you ..i will always love you my friend..<3 Dave
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Sweet Jeremy...
Thanks so much for reading my poetry...your comments mean the world to me!! <3 and
's to u
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Hello again Mindie! It's great to see that you're writing again my friend. This is a sad and terrible reality for so many people in this world. One that seems to never end. It's great to know that there is someone out there who will always be there to support you through it all. Lovely work here my friend and I hope to read more from you again soon!
Jeremy0826
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