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average

Mirror mirror speak to me
i need to know what you see
am i beauty and am i grace
or is it average...what you see?

with orbs of hazel
and tresses of night
i need to know
if i see me right

my form, not perfect
my skin of flaw
i see my imperfection
society, i withdraw

Average isnt good enough
average is obscurity
my pitiful image
my insecurity

So mirror mirror tell me a lie
i need to hear of my ravenous beauty
am i selfish and am i vain?
average me, im going insane

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say what you will.
i am open to your words.

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  • sunflowers21573
    January 7

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    Wow, this is sooo powerful! I can relate to this poem even. Love the second to last stanza. U are a very talented poet. Good luck in the contest, though i am sure u will win a trophy!