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[ You said to lock you in ]

You said to lock you in
Consented all the way
Kissed me while I tied you
Told me that you'd stay

I'm perched on top of your little cage
You're looking up at me looking down
Just a little playful rage
To get me going all around

And you know how to get me right
Even from behind these bars
Baby come and get me tonight
Underneath the stars

Cause there's just something about the way you play
That won't let me let you go today

-Andi-

Author notes

No, this is not a fantasy of mine...it was a picture on DeviantArt that I used as a prompt...not for a contest, but because I felt like it.

-Andi

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 19, 2008
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    Interestingly, convincingly real...


    • Andiness
      December 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much for reading and thatnk you for the applause.

      Its really not a fantasy of mine...I'm trying to find the picture not that I have a silver membership for a week so I can put it on...but my computer is being difficult


  • ScreaminMime
    December 18, 2008

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    Roses are red,
    water balloons are made to burst.

    No one else has commented on this poem?
    Well, I guess I'm the first!


    • Andiness
      December 21, 2008
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      Nice...I like the rhyme...is that normal for you or am I a special case??