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Cliffhanger

Adventure is swirling
in the air
invigorating us
in our secret
early morning
rebellion.


Stay just a little longer,
they won't wake up.

Dance with danger,
hold on tight...

I won't let go
if you don't.

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Picture credit:
Black and white -test- by Pokoa

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  • badnovocaine
    December 16, 2008

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    Oh nice!!! What an exciting sense of adventure I got from this, and I loved the picture as well, I thought it was very creative and I am glad somebody decided to do one of the pics, as I spent a very long amount of time decided which pictures to put up I am very picky on my photographs and drawings, it takes me forevvverr!
    Anyways, even though this was short I love it!!!
    Thank you for putting time and effort into this,
    thanks for entering.


    • Icarus
      December 16, 2008

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      Thank you very much The idea behind this is from the movie Foxfire. There's this part where the girl climbs over the edge of a bridge like this to find something that fell for another girl she's pursuing. The picture reminded me a lot of it.


      • badnovocaine
        December 16, 2008
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        I should check the movie out, I am always looking for interesting ones.
        Thanks!