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moonlight

I’ll dance under this poetic moonlight,
twirling into the night wrapped in silky words.
I won’t think about a thing,
just let my pen twist and twirl on this page,
because now is not the time to worry.
I’ll let my thoughts disappear,
I’ll wash away as my pen dances on the paper,
and my tongue dances beneath my lips.
I’ll let my soft lips smile.
I’ll follow the rainbow lights as I dance,
filling my lungs with sweet lullabies,
living in the moment.
twirling with grace under this shining moonlight,
because no one is watching me…

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a newer poem by meeh. i really like it!!! yayayayayeeer. yeer i like it. okaay will the poem sells it selfs sooo :]

it's good i changed. 0_0

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  • krystalpendragon
    January 11, 2009

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    wow, another great one, i really like your writting style.
    "living in the moment.
    twirling with grace under this shining moonlight,
    because no one is watching me"
    ^ wonderful


  • PaintedParisPassion
    December 17, 2008

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    wow yes. i am most impressed by this piece and by your talent at such a young age! youre vocabulary is very well. great imagery. good job!

    -B


  • myusikah
    December 17, 2008
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    I agree with karinabalan. Its an amazing poem, with great imagery. Beautiful.


  • MidnightxSun
    December 16, 2008
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    Marvelous

    I love this, it's truly marvelous


  • shiratikva
    December 16, 2008

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    Wonderful poem

    ''I’ll dance under this poetic moonlight,
    twirling into the night wrapped in silky words'' .
    It's my favorite part. I like your poem.
    Well done.

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