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prompt from pic (not finished)

across the table spread; blushing red.
your need, my urge
deliberated
as i'm liberated
sated
kisses; smackers
smacked against stinging flesh,

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  • Blueskywonder
    December 18, 2008

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    Yes, you have done a really good job with this as it is... i like it

    Great imagery


  • JinSays gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    What you have here is pretty good in itself.
    I wish you the best in this challenge,
    love,
    jin


  • Happy3
    December 16, 2008
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    Wow...
    that is gr8.
    You're so tempting and seductive, sweet woman