You stand there watching
as the stars move above
believe me when i say
fear is the heart of love.
Flower pedals float on the water
red,yellow,and white
the birds chirp so loudly
as they fly into the night.
Tears collect on your face
you tell of dreams once gone
but the way you remember them
is just all wrong.
Your thoughts always near you
have now gone
blood on your hands
what have you done?
One side of the bed is cold
the other, filled with you
youve always been lonely
but now your feeling are true
You tried closing your mind
by ending your days
your heart has grown colder
in each and every way.
i was bored...
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aww that was soo sweet(well in a way) haha to me and my demented mind at least lol
great job!! -
That's what I feel like sometimes. Its too much. Good job.
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Wow, this was so generic it bored me to tears. I don't even remember what it was about.
And the rhyming scheme? Seriously? Come on now. If I wanted to read this kind of poetry, I would have looked at an eight year olds' work. -
One word..
Amazing.
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