I am more alone
in this black abyss
called ‘home;’
than the first star
to ever exist
in the sky.
Author notes
prompt: lonely
20 words.
ehh.. this isn't that great, but I tried, hope you like it 
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie ...20 poets, 20 words on a word by Thor-201.
900 points, ended December 16, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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gorgeous.
just fucking beautiful.
ugh.
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this is wnderful. congrats on the silver. i like your metaphor
take care. Stephanie ♥ -
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thanks
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Thank you for your entry. I like this. Best of luck in the contest.
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thanks for the silver!
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"I am more alone
in this black abyss
called ‘home;’ "
But
you rhymed!!!
I likes though
XD
Shelly
x
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lol
accidental rhyme is the best kind
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Yeah, it really is.
I soooooooooooo wanna host another quickie, they're really fun! -
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they are fun!
and im addicted to hosting them / contests in general
but i like quickies best cause they fill up quickly.. im verrrrry impatient when it comes to contests. and i hate when people don't enter them like my non-quickie contest. blaaah
did you enter btw? cause you should.. hmm actually i think you did and you said youd write me a new poem but you entered a pw
and im beginning to ramble on and on
so ill shutup now
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I like how we're having a conversation in comments on one of your poems, it's deadly
Yeah I entered your "anything goes" contest with a PW
I also entered 'bored at work quickie #4' with a new write.
Go look
And no one really enters my quickies
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