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The Air I Breathe

You love it when you're in distress.
You love it when your life is a mess.
You love it when everything's good.
You love it when you did what you could.
You love life and all that's around.
You love the strife that shakes the ground.
You love to live, that's why you breathe.
I love you, you're all the air I need

Came to me in the middle of a math final so i wrote it down instead of finishing the page i was on.

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  • The Nose
    September 3
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    but its undeniable this poem brings more joy than that math final


  • PurpleSkyJuliet
    December 18, 2008

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    Typical you, writing a love poem for your girlfriend instead up finishing a math final

    But anyways, this is really good. It's very true, I like how you started most of the lines "You love it"

    Great job, bro