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Goodbye forever

Are you listening
When I talk
When I cry out your name
In the middle of the night
Because of the scary noise
But how can you
When you are never there
It hurts to know
That you are never there
When I need you the most
Because you are off
Doing only God knows what
Does it hurt to know
That I've moved on
Does it hurt to know
That I love another
Well you should of known
That this was going to happen
Because of the way
You had been acting
So don't act hurt
When I'm the one
That should be hurt
But strangely I'm not
So goodbye forever
And thank God

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  • heartsshadow
    December 16, 2008

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    oh my

    I could put this poem on the two sides of a coin..it flips from one to the other...a very creative way of interpreting *moving on* I loved it, yes it sparks my interest very much xD good job my friend