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Ripped Away

sitting in the classroom
people all around
everybody's talking
but i don't hear a saound
starring at the nothingness
zoneing into space
i can't even feel the tears
running down my face
lost inside the darkness
yearning to be free
wanting to release this pain
that he gave to me
holding it all inside
my secret's unrevealed
he doesn't seen to realize
that my soul, he has killed
but still he came to me that night
the molest continued on
i lied there frozen as he raped me
my self-esteem was gone
the teacher calls me to her desk
then asks if i'm alright
i lie and say i'm fine
afraid of what might happen tonight
frightened by his anger
i couldn't tell him no
but i tried to push him off of me
he just wouldn't let me go
now walking in the hallway
the bell's about to ring
kid's pushing and shoving
but i don't feel a thing
none of them are like me
they don't even have a clue
what it's like to have your innocense
ripped away from you

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  • biibii79
    May 31
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    i like it !

  • Rae2732
    May 4

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    wow i can really relate to this =( I'm so sorry that stuff like this happens. its terrible... anyways great write. Very well written *claps* =)


  • DancingQueenAngi
    December 18, 2008
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    Beautiful! I'm so sorry if this truly happened to you. I hope that it has ceased and that you are able to heal. A few typos

    "he doesn't seen to realize
    that my soul, he has killed
    but still he came to me that night
    the molest continued on"
    "seen" should be "seem"

    "what it's like to have your innocense"
    "innocense" should be "innocence"

    ~Angi


  • jkb-unlike
    December 16, 2008

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    I really liked this

    At the moment im am going through alot i just got the asshole out of my house (my sisters bf) and 2morrow i have to talk to more people about what he did 2 me. today is my 16th b-day and to be honest im surprised im here. I can really relate to this poem.