my son, the first born
feelings down deep in my heart
love you forever
Author notes
Unconditional love for any child, but especially for a first born son.
A contest entry
- Prompts 20 entries, short and sweet... by mysticstorm.
700 points, ended January 9, 2009, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice write. I'm the first born girl!
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Sweet and so full on meaning ing three lines...a wonderful haiku...I feel this way about him and it is amazing to me, to love another so deeply.
Thank you so much!
mystic
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Beautiful Sentiments...
Wishing you all the best in the contest!! Peace, Cyn 
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awwe how sweet! I totally agree with you. This is how I feel about my son, my 1st born.
A wonderful haiku!!!! Best wishes in this contest.
SilverButterfly
Mary
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