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A Mother's Love (Haiku)

my son, the first born
feelings down deep in my heart
love you forever

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Unconditional love for any child, but especially for a first born son.

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  • Judith Chandler
    April 19
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    nice write. I'm the first born girl!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 9

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    Sweet and so full on meaning ing three lines...a wonderful haiku...I feel this way about him and it is amazing to me, to love another so deeply.

    Thank you so much!

    mystic


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments...

    Wishing you all the best in the contest!! Peace, Cyn


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    awwe how sweet! I totally agree with you. This is how I feel about my son, my 1st born.
    A wonderful haiku!!!! Best wishes in this contest.

    SilverButterfly
    Mary