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Memories of You

Your words,
the harshest of winds,

This storm has flooded the earth
again.

Reliving every moment,
but we can't relive the past.

As the winds continue,
your words never change.

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only 30 words for quickie contest

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    December 17, 2008

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    great take on the prompt. i really like this. the imagery is wonderful. the first two stanzas are my favourite.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • ylova
    December 17, 2008
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    Great take on the prompt. Good luck to you in the contest

    Much love
    Ylova