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What would you do?

What would you do if your true love, loved somebody else?
Would you fight for his love?
Or would you wait cause you know it's worth waiting for?

Sometimes you have to ask yourselves these questions.
Does he feel the same for you?
Does he even like you?

And sometimes you just have to move on.
Even when the guy you love,
doesn't love you back.

Yes, it hurts.
But that painful feeling will go away when you find that other special guy.
So wait. Just wait. Its worth it.

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  • Ashlee17559
    December 16, 2008
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    Wow

    I feel u read my i died poem and cope, u might can relate!!


  • Triami Arack
    December 16, 2008
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    I understand how you feel in this matter, I would do exactly the same thing in that situation.