Will you come home to me
Where you know you belong?
Don't wait for full moon
To sing your goodnight song
Ride the path with silent speed
And catch the full moon fever
For both in love and you
I am a true believer
Leached colorless by the moon
I'm waiting at my door
First to hear your heartbeat
Then see the one I so adore
I hear your ragged breaths
From your haste to come back home
I missed you on your journey
I missed you every day you'd roam
I smile as you appear
In the blinding full moon light
As you find your way back to me
The thorn bush turned white
Author notes
Inspired by The Black Ghosts, "Full Moon"
A contest entry
- 17000+ Points for your Best - Effort by Ken-Maverick.
10000 points, ended January 15, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
ROCK ON TWILIGHTNESS!!!
Comments
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This is a lovely love poem, such imagry in your words. Favorite lines:
"Ride the path with silent speed
And catch the full moon fever
For both in love and you
I am a true believer"
Adore that part.
Score is 7/10
best of luck
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Lovely rhyme and it flowed all the way through,
thanks for your entry and all the best to you in this contest
Ken
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terrific poem
a well penned piece -
WOW! this was amazing! i loved the rhyme and the imagery in this was awesome and vivid indeed. definitely a winner!! good luck in this contest!
MOM
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