the growling, howling of the beast as it rips the night to shreds;
then angles its jaw towards the sky and cries for the teal blue moon
Author notes
prompt: harsh winds
A contest entry
- 'a bored at work' QUICKIE #3 by etoile.
575 points, ended December 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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intense - great imagery, great emotional evocation
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Ah..what a imaginative scenario you created..well though ,creative poetic scene is here..love it..well done..and thanks for this wonderful imagination..
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wonderful.
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ooooh thats a great image! its verrry descriptive... intense! =D i could just imagine hearing it and seeing it like i was actually there watching
it was perfect! loved it!
=D hugglez,
adria <3
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amazing take on the prompt. i really liked this write. it's very scary, and the imagery is amazing. i like your imagery. great ending.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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again blown away by your ability to use metaphors and paint pictures
good luck in the contest -
Great work!
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okay...note to self...do not go out at night
this is powerful. The imagery just grabs the reader...makes you hear the winds howl. Excellent
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yikes- I could definitely feel this one. Powerful imagery.
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