Those winds of time were harsh and brutal
Took away my very soul
My happiness, my being.
But could'nt touch the little candle of hope
That burns in my heart's corner!
A contest entry
- 'a bored at work' QUICKIE #3 by etoile.
575 points, ended December 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think.
Comments
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this is a very hopeful poem, i like it. great take on the prompt. the imagery is amazing, especially at the last two lines.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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Nice take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Much love
Ylova
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Love it
I really dig this entry...good luck to you
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