what I adored about her
besides that mane of kinky red hair
and hint of cockney accent
was how she served up hot tea
spiked with peach brandy
on rainy autumn afternoons
and those thin cucumber sandwiches
delicate and dainty as the knickers
she let me slide down to her ankles
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lovely use of the surprise element in the last line.what an original simile comparing cucumber sandwiches and knickers.great stuff.
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someone made me a dainty cucumber sandwich last week. it inspired me
thanks for the comment!
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Hi Travis!
kinky red hair - i like that. i like kinky/cockney/spiked/knickers/ankles
all those k's.
I think your last line should actually be something like:
she let me slide down to her ankles
don't you think?
Sweet little thing this is.
Lisa
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yeah, at first I had slide down to her ankles, but changed it for some reason or another. but you're the woman; you should know.
I'll change it back.
thanks for the comment!
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ain't no british women like that i know
naughty boy!
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I've met brit women like this.
in fact, I met one in new orleans once
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- how interesting
new orleans sounds so long ago now... i miss that
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lol you are naughty.
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and you thought cisco was the naughty one
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where da fuckin white wimmens at?
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mostly in north dallas.
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