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shooting pain.

seams broken apart,
my heart unzipped from it's strings;
you did this to me.

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haiku.
this isn't that great..

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  • Pocket Rocket
    April 22
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    I can feel the pain..
    Great piece


  • letters to no one
    January 10

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    Awh it is great, but it's sad

    So sad.

    Can I kill the person?
    Please?
    Pretty please?

    Shelly
    ♥


  • aanika
    December 21, 2008

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    lol I have issues with short poems
    as in i feel like there's so much missing.
    but this was good.


  • Joseph Hollis
    December 17, 2008

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    Such heartbreak in these words. This one is powerfully expressive. Thank you for your entry.