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Pure...

These brutal scars on my flesh
Fails to define me.
Something inside me whispers
Me the soul, is untouched yet!

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  • gypsy camp
    December 16, 2008
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    lose the exclamation mark.
    also, this reminds of The Veronica's song, Untouched lol.