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Under Filtered Skies

s h a r e d  was the red that set 
Over shepard deligh's contains
over rated filters

filters for threats alike the 'tears for fears'
for all those crimson cries that queered quivers of discomfia
were being put in cubicles, where of dreamt
clouds could clement juices, of bitter and sour
sometimes sweet yet never
under-mind the taste of something a selfish man couldn't relate to

take away the 'take away' to cook in hours'e of red boils
estimate sheer warmth - an eastier may be kneeded...
here - red again, with pink, pur' and plur of bluey green
'elf fantasia'
elfantaste enchant
"give up your seat blue sky, I have you under the thumb
under thy thigh, over my lap, over-lapping
gimme your direction of seperation
your sky that suffers the cloudy
for I, wise man, and you're above my ruling country"
red - cheeks of embarissment,
the impress blush - deeper orange crush

filters for.... this used to be conquer,
red in value
for now it's scienseated nature
full of solar exposure

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  • Glasyalabolas
    January 22, 2009

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    Very cryptic and comes across as a stream of consciousness, gives the reader plenty to mull over and think about.

    Good write.


    • LeanneBridgewater
      January 25, 2009
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      glasy

      the stray of colours aye.
      the hazy sleeper mockin' bird said 'goodbye morn, you are the burden - mull you whine in down in den'

      thankyou hun for readinbg, and commenting. lets hope it tastes better than the mull of mulled wines self?

      chowa