me me me me me my i
do you want a piece of my pie?
the real thing that maters is size
then what to do with you, unless you defy
all i ever wanted was just some love
all i ever wanted was just some love
all you gonna do is give me a shove
all i ever wanted was just one love
ya ya ya ya ya your you
is a love like yours taboo?
i know this but i still pursue
then blow me away, come subdue
all i ever wanted was just a screw
all i ever wanted was just a screw
all you gonna give me is the flew
all i'll ever want is just a clue
me me me me me my i
can you do it for me, make me high?
drugs are many people's demise
then you gonna lift me up, help me fry
all i ever wanted was to get fucked up
all i ever wanted was to get fucked up
all you gonna tell me is i'm just a pup
all i'll ever need is to just wake up
bay bay bay bay baby hun
can you see and feel what you've done?
my destruction has begun
so blow me away, show me the gun
Author notes
i don't know what to tell you.
it isn't hard to read...
what do you want?
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this is totally like a song. sounds great, i love the flow, i think itd be a great poppy song, an interesting juxtaposition to the raw lyrics/poem. either way awesome.. you captured some stuff other people may feel and think but cannot express, and you do it in such an artful way. i know i have felt exactly as described.
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i did have a melody in my mind when i was writing it.
i do that much any more so it stand out i think.
it would make a good pop song. lol
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It reminds me of a Japanese song called "I My Me Mine" by Polysics. But it's a good poem, could be kinda like a song in a way
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i am just hoping that it doesn't come to this, i don't wanna lose a drinking buddy, lol, but this is a strong poem that hold more then the word show, keep it flowing
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lovely
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