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Rising

Light that breaks across the sky as dawn,
taking back the night-claimed world once more,
Graceful lines of cloud with color drawn,

luminous horizon is restored.
Sleeping sights awaken with a yawn;

grand illuminations do not snore.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Written in Harrisham Rhyme.

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 27, 2008

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    This is a beautifully crafted and vivid poem, expressing how a new luminous day is being welcomed in all its grace.
    A positive write.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • McRae by nature
    December 16, 2008

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    So very impressive. I love the graceful quality in your work. The beautiful rhyme too. Great job.

    Carrie