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Star Signs

It seems I've come undone,
secretly you have won.
Your eyes dark as coal,
as my soul you take control.
I can barely speak,
you make me so weak.
You may never know,
how i cared for you so.
We both agreed on friends,
but i need this to end.
Stars always shine,
don't you think it's a sign?
My many chances i have blew,
but i will ALWAYS love you.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 16, 2008

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    this is honestly golden i love it but i don't know if this is good or bad, cause it hold a mixture of both and i don't know the whole story, keep it flowing